wilderooc | GAMEWIDE HMD ※ APRIL

This is the periodic Gamewide HMD meme!

❧ The Gamewide HMD is optional. If you opt out of participating in the gamewide hmd, please at least have an hmd up in your journal.

❧ This is not a love meme but it is okay to tell a player they're doing well. Please also keep this constructive and let them know what it is you like so they know to keep doing it.

❧ If you ask for crit please also give some to other players. While we can't enforce this because some of it will be anon, the mod team would like to ask players to please try to give at least (3) other players crit.

❧ Please keep crit polite and constructive.

❧ Please escalate severe or repeat issues to the mods, if appropriate. If repeated attempts at constructive crit don't bear any fruit, there are rules for the many possible causes of this: bad player behavior, ICA=ICC, IC /=OOC, characters having to be IC, etc. If frustrating problems consistently happen without any improvement, it is possible they're verging on a rule break, so if that is the case, rather than letting things devolve into hostility, please escalate things and contact the mods to see what steps can be taken next.

Flat | Top-Level Comments Only

This is where you can leave crit for the mods. Please let us know if anything is bothering you, if you have suggestions for improvements in how the game is run, if you have any crit for how the game's npcs are handled, if there are things you like that you want us to keep doing, or if there are certain things you want to see in the near future.

This is also a good place to ask questions or make suggestions about the overarching plot.

THIS IS NOT A KISS-UP MOVE but I just wanted to say that I am so impressed by how much forethought went into the game mechanics here and how thoughtful the mods have been about predicting issues players may run into. Kudos.

We're glad to hear that! We really do want to try anticipating things so nothing interferes with people's fun. If we ever drop the ball on that or miss something or just haven't thought of something, please let us know because we can always change game mechanics or how we do things for the future.

I was away from RP for quite a while before returning here, so I'm a bit rusty, and Dixon's a new character for me. I am open to any and all feedback!

I also have an HMD on my journal that has no IP logging, although not anon.

I'm still extremely new to playing Anita and would absolutely appreciate some crit over how I'm handling her. I also have an HMD on my journal as well.

Edited 2018-04-08 06:06 (UTC)

Phosphophyllite |

shipoftheseus
Shuichi Saihara |

shyhara

Both are new muses for me so any constructive criticism is welcome! Both also have private HMDs in their journals that should be anon-enabled with IP logging off, if you prefer that route for whatever reason.

Brainiac 5 |

googledox
Kon-el/Superboy |

konman

I have anon-enabled, IP logging off hmds in their journals as well.

Monika |

loadme
Agrias Oaks |

cleansingstrike

IP-disabled and anon-friendly entries are in both journals, too.

Monika faintly disturbs me in an engaging way. I'm not familiar with the canon and thus I don't want to read the app for details, so I asked a friend, whose response was pretty much to tell me that since I didn't want spoilers I better play it myself sooner than later like I've been told multiple times before. SO I GUESS YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB?

Hah, that sounds like the pretty typical answer.

But thanks! I've never played her before so I'm glad you feel that way.

Hello! First time playing Saber and so I'm a little nervous about her voice. Any feedback is appreciated! There's an HMD on my journal as well.

Just Alacruun! There's also an HMD on his journal.

This isn't so much my asking for Crit as making myself available to it.

I prefer it non-anon, in case I have questions, and sooner rather than later, so things don't snowball as they are stewed upon.

It's actually been a few years since I've played Bart, so I'm kind of getting back into the swing of things with him and any crit or tips would be greatly appreciated.

He also has an HMD on his journal that is anon friendly, screened and has IP tracking turned off.

No way, I would have had no idea. Your Bart so far is legitimately hilarious and touching at the same time, and I've been stalking a lot of the threads he's in for pure entertainment.

The only thing I can think of, and to be honest it gets into nitpicking territory, is that sometimes you get your homophones mixed up, but overall that's just a way minor thing.

Keep rolling!

Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that he's actually funny! That's something I was really worried about with writing him.

And yeah, I really need to double down on checking that I used the correct homophones when I double check my posts. I've been kicking myself when I see that in rereads.

I only have Daryl here. I'm not asking for crit right now, but if you have any, go ahead and give it.

He has an HMD on his journal as well, if that's perferred.

I don't have any negative crit but I figure positive crit is good too!

I'm not all the way caught up on Walking Dead but I did watch for a few seasons and I just wanted to say that you're doing great with Daryl's character voice.

Thank you so much! I appreciate that! His voice when he isn't being a brash, angry person, can be a bit difficult to pin down because of how much of himself he hides. So thank you, again!

I've been fairly out of Rp for a few years. I'm hoping I'm doing a ok job at it. Please do tell me where I should improve or if I'm doing something wrong! Brisby has a hmd on her journal too so...

Just Alistair here for me. Been out of RP for awhile and getting back into the swing of things just recently these past few months. I understand I can take awhile to tag, then I tag in bursts then have a break. I'm trying to be more consistent with that. I backtag forever though!

As for character crit I'm all for it! I have a catch all HMD on my musebox rather than on my character's journals which you can find here, if you'd prefer to do it anonymously (IP logging is off also and comments are screened!). I appreciate any constructive crit to help me improve!

Here's Clark!

He's got an anon-enabled, IP-off HMD in his journal as well

Heyo if there's anything you need, let me know?

It's been a while since I've played Sirius so any feedback is appreciated. Ronan (

somnioergosum) hasn't really been around much yet but feedback is welcome for him too. They both have HMDs on their journals too.

GAMEWIDE HMD ※ APRIL

THE MODS

Re: THE MODS

no subject

Lisa | Jason Dixon

July | Anita Fite

kelly's losers

KOREL'S NERDS

no subject

no subject

no subject

Emmy | Arturia Pendragon (Saber)

Stefan

Marie - Robbie Baldwin & Tim Drake-Wayne

Roach | Bart Allen

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Autumn | Daryl Dixon

Re: Autumn | Daryl Dixon

Re: Autumn | Daryl Dixon

Bit | Mrs. Brisby

Roz | Alistair

no subject

Simmons | Red vs Blue

Garshil | Sirius Black + Ronan Lynch